你们看看我写的行不行，不过我自己觉得我第一句就写错了帮我找一下有没有错误，满分5分，看我能打几分啊
It is very important to keep health.I would like to talk about many ways to keep health.I always get up early,and I go out do exercise about half an hour.As soon as I go back home eat breakfast,they are an ege ,a cup of milk and noddles.I eat vegetables ten times a week,they are good for our health.And I neither eat junk foodnor drink coffee,they are bad for our health.I do exercise seven times a week .So,I am very health. 帮我看看有没有错的单词，评个分