Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to b

Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is more reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer customers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at their own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all. increasing →increasingly

(答案→)increasing →increasingly 解析：本文叙述了作者不赞成网上购物的原因。一是网上购物不可靠。二是顾客不能触摸商品，只能看见图片。三是商品在运输的过程中可能要被损害。【小题1】popular 是形容词，其前应该用副词修饰。【小题2】全文都是用一般现在时，此处也应该保持一致。【小题3】根据上下文，前一句说：一些人喜欢网上购物，下面又说：我不喜欢，因此前后是转折关系。用But 表转折。【小题4】根据句子的意思，我不喜欢网上购物，因为网上购物比传统的销售不可靠。而不是更可靠。因此用less 表示级别不如。【小题5】merchant 是可数名词，前面有some修饰，应该用其复数形式。【小题6】offer sb sth 是固定用法。false information online 是间接宾语。【小题7】 the items that is usually presented by... 中that 引导的定语从句修饰先行词items，并代替items作从句的主语，所以谓语应该用are 以保持主谓在数上的一致性。【小题8】the items 和作后置定语的deliver 之间应该是动宾或者被动关系，应该用动词的-ed形式。【小题9】from which consumers expect 中which consumers expect作from的宾语，在宾语从句中，which是哪一个，有选择范围，而what 是什么，没有选择范围。【小题10】in a word 是固定搭配，意思是：总而言之。符合语境。

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