我叫XXX，1991年5月13日在XXXXXX出生。即将于2014年6月毕业于XXXXXXXX，主要学习道路与桥梁工程专业。我出生在一个充满着温馨和谐的气氛的家庭里。我的父亲是一个糕点师，培养了我创造式的思维。父亲从小就严格教导我怎样去做人，培养我做一个遇事坚强，做事有毅力，对什么事情都要充满责任感的人。母亲出自教师家庭，潜移默化的培养了我的严谨性格和对知识的渴望。从小学起就成绩突出的我，性格开朗，喜欢交朋友，有了朋友的陪伴我度过了丰富精彩的童年时光。
步入初中之后，父母对我的学业更加严格要求。由于成绩突出曾担任学习委员、班长之职。2006年6月考入河南省禹州市第三高级中学，高中学习了一年的小提琴，也接触到了韩国的一些文化。自此接触了少量的韩国语言。度过高中充实的3年后，2010年7月我以优异的成绩考入河南理工大学土木工程学院继续4年道路与桥梁工程专业的学习。学习期间品学兼优，荣幸被老师推荐学生会工作。结交了更多的朋友，扩充了交际领域，增加了我对生活的认识。更加珍惜我的大学生活！
为了以后更好的发展，同时又发现韩国现在的经济等各个方面都比较好，尤其教育方面更加的突出，我想学习与我本科专业有关的环境材料专业，所以选择在韩国读研究生，而国立釜山大学的设施，奖学金制度等各种制度都很好，这将有利于我在今后的学习中会有更好的发展。并且贵国语言，礼节，建筑，服饰，饮食，娱乐等各方面文化是一直深深吸引着我想去接触了解的国度。
毕业以后，我想回国发展，把我所学的专业知识发挥出来并应用到实践工作中，为中国的环境材料方面的研究尽一份自己的力量。目前的中国，已经加入世界贸易组织，经济蓬勃发展，正吸引着国际复合型人才的目光，相信未来的中国，会有更大的发展空间和更多的机遇。
我要申请出国 请大神帮我把申请翻译成英文啊！谢谢啦！
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解决时间 2021-02-02 08:55
- 提问者网友：遮云壑
- 2021-02-01 12:01
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- 五星知识达人网友：一叶十三刺
- 2021-02-01 12:50
My name is xxx. I was born in May 13th, 1991. I am going to be graduated in June, 2014, and I major in "Architechture of Roads and Bridges" (你那个专业应该有专用的名词你去查一下). I was born and raised in a warm, accord family. My father is a baker, who have influenced me to develop on my creativity. He have taught me the importance of resilience and determinance since I have young. My mother came from a teacher's family, and she help developed my predent manner and the desire to learn. As well as achieving highly in academic since elementary school, I was also an open and social person. I made a lot of great friends, who accompanied my splendid childhood.
After stepping into middle school, my parents have higher expectations on my academic achievements. As my academic was outstanding in my class, I held the leadership positions of head of study committee and the student leader for the class. In 2006, I was admitted into a top high school, which ranked 3rd in Shuzhou, Henan city. I have learned violin for a year, and touched base upon Korean culture and language in high school. After the fulfilling 3 years of high school, I was then admitted into Henan Technology University --Department of Civil Engineering with my outstanding grades.There, I continued a four year journey of the proffessional study of archtechture of roads and bridges. While pursuing academic excellence, I didn't forget to balance my life with excurriculum activities. I was honorably reconmended by my teacher to join the "Student Council". There I made more friends and extended my social realm. I gained more real life experience, and that made me value my university experience even more!
For a better development in the future, I found that Korea has been a rapidly growing country in many perspectives nowadays, especially in the education system. Therefore, I want to pursue the "Environment Material" MBA in Korea, which is connected to my major in undergraduate. Busan National University have advanced facilities, grand scholarship system, and many other outstanding systems. I believe that those will help me to propel and improve to thrive for a vetter future. More over, the Korean language, manner, architecture, clothing, food, and entertainment also vastly appeals to me.
After graduation, I am planning to to back to my home country. I would like to use all the academic achievements in actual work, and contribute to the research of "Environmental Material " in China. The China today has joined the World Trading Network and is an rapidly growing country, it greatly attract international polymaths. I believe there's going to be greater development and opportunity in the future China.
ok 我翻译完了， 安全按照你写的。我在国外呆了很多年 也写过很多申请信， 尤其是美国的。 在我的角度就是在美国申请的角度 （也许和韩国的不一样）我的意见是：
1. 你写的东西显的太自傲了， 其实很多大学只是想要一个真实的， 现实的你 而不是一个经历完美但没有一点特色的 applicant
2. 我觉得开头的时候你讲你父母太多了， 是你申请大学还是你父母申请？
3. 我觉得你要是想要去那个大学你应该对那个大学做一些更加深入的了解。 你讲的几点都非常非常笼统。 如果我把这封申请信仍在广场中央， 没有写那个大学的名字， 没有人会知道你要申请的是哪所大学？
4. 我不懂你为什么一直要强调你回中国的发展。 也许你在中国不知道， 但是我在一个国际环境下可以体会到现在中韩关系并不是那么好。 你写的意思就是， 我要到你们国家学完， 然后把我自己的国家变的更强盛。 这有点显的自私了，我不能确定如果我是一个韩国人我会喜欢看到这些。
就这么多了， 我还是按你的话翻译的， 我的意见听不听随你了
After stepping into middle school, my parents have higher expectations on my academic achievements. As my academic was outstanding in my class, I held the leadership positions of head of study committee and the student leader for the class. In 2006, I was admitted into a top high school, which ranked 3rd in Shuzhou, Henan city. I have learned violin for a year, and touched base upon Korean culture and language in high school. After the fulfilling 3 years of high school, I was then admitted into Henan Technology University --Department of Civil Engineering with my outstanding grades.There, I continued a four year journey of the proffessional study of archtechture of roads and bridges. While pursuing academic excellence, I didn't forget to balance my life with excurriculum activities. I was honorably reconmended by my teacher to join the "Student Council". There I made more friends and extended my social realm. I gained more real life experience, and that made me value my university experience even more!
For a better development in the future, I found that Korea has been a rapidly growing country in many perspectives nowadays, especially in the education system. Therefore, I want to pursue the "Environment Material" MBA in Korea, which is connected to my major in undergraduate. Busan National University have advanced facilities, grand scholarship system, and many other outstanding systems. I believe that those will help me to propel and improve to thrive for a vetter future. More over, the Korean language, manner, architecture, clothing, food, and entertainment also vastly appeals to me.
After graduation, I am planning to to back to my home country. I would like to use all the academic achievements in actual work, and contribute to the research of "Environmental Material " in China. The China today has joined the World Trading Network and is an rapidly growing country, it greatly attract international polymaths. I believe there's going to be greater development and opportunity in the future China.
ok 我翻译完了， 安全按照你写的。我在国外呆了很多年 也写过很多申请信， 尤其是美国的。 在我的角度就是在美国申请的角度 （也许和韩国的不一样）我的意见是：
1. 你写的东西显的太自傲了， 其实很多大学只是想要一个真实的， 现实的你 而不是一个经历完美但没有一点特色的 applicant
2. 我觉得开头的时候你讲你父母太多了， 是你申请大学还是你父母申请？
3. 我觉得你要是想要去那个大学你应该对那个大学做一些更加深入的了解。 你讲的几点都非常非常笼统。 如果我把这封申请信仍在广场中央， 没有写那个大学的名字， 没有人会知道你要申请的是哪所大学？
4. 我不懂你为什么一直要强调你回中国的发展。 也许你在中国不知道， 但是我在一个国际环境下可以体会到现在中韩关系并不是那么好。 你写的意思就是， 我要到你们国家学完， 然后把我自己的国家变的更强盛。 这有点显的自私了，我不能确定如果我是一个韩国人我会喜欢看到这些。
就这么多了， 我还是按你的话翻译的， 我的意见听不听随你了
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- 1楼网友：酒者煙囻
- 2021-02-01 15:04
非常高兴能有机会参加“海外学习实习项目”的选拔。我深知本科学历是远远不够的。在我的职业规划中“出国考研”是我必须实现的一件事情，并在为此努力着。适逢学校有这个项目能让我提前有机会体验到国外的学习，并能很好的锻炼我的英文水平。也为我未来选择出国留学的学校获得经验。可以更好更快地适应未来的学习生活。所以希望学校可以给我这个机会，为我的理想推波助澜，我必会在这2个月的时间努力学习，努力提高自己，很好的完成学校布置给我的任务！为校争光！
i am very happy to have the opportunity to take part in the selection of the 'study abroad internship program'. i am also well aware of my undergraduate degree is far from adequate. 'taking my postgraduate examination abroad' is the thing i got to realize in my career planning, and i am now working hard on it. this project will allow me to experience the learning abroad in advance, and a great chance to exercise my english level. i also would gain some experience for chosing school to study abroad in the near future, and can learn to adapt to future studying life better and faster. therefore, i am hoping that the university would give me this opportunity and help me to fulfill my ideals. i must study hard and strive to improve myself within two months to complete my school assignments and finish my task to win an honour for our university!
很乐意能够帮到你，希望会对你有助。
如满意敬请采纳，o(∩_∩)o谢谢你
- 2楼网友：迷人又混蛋
- 2021-02-01 13:32
好好找个留学机构帮你做文书吧，你这个自己写的几乎不能用，有些只能写在简历里的东西写在这里，有些不能出现的内容也出现了，而且个人性格特点和个人优点的篇幅不够。
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