帮我看下这封英文信有没有错误,谢谢.

自己写的,要寄给一个重要的人.帮忙改改错误,觉得不好的修正一下.感激不尽.

Dear ***:

Hello！how do you do？

Sorry that i didn‘t writr back soon the e-mail cause i had a grave fever.For this reason i didn't go to school for one week(in reality i am very happy about this,that i stay at home for few days without doing anything)

Two years ago my mom was sick (because she works too busily and got a big pressure)Fortunately now she is recovering well. Well,i came back to study here because she though that after 5 years I already had studied Chinese very well and i have to learn italian also as well as Chinese 'cause i am a half italian.I also have studied Malaysian for 2 years but now i don't remember anymore,and can you speak Indonesian?

I saw those photos of Bali that you took,they are really wonderful!! I love traveling too..

On the other hand,you are right,that temporality i have no boyfriend,still alone.^^ Doesn't matter,maybe is better stay by oneself(in my opinion),I have already too many things to do at school for learning,in our class we have to study 4 languages together(Latin,English,French,Italian)I am gonna crazy for this,and in our class they're all female. >< They are very studious,but i still like playing like a child. - -enough things to do everyday,have no time for boyfriend.>< As for you,don't worry that i believe you will find a new girlfriend soon! ^^(as fast as you can)

Are you studying in the University now? Which department?

At last,best wishes.(And I wish you a Happy Halloween in advance)

Hello！how do you do？

Sorry that i didn‘t write back soon (write back 本身就有回信的意思，不用再加email)，cause i had a high fever.For this reason i didn't go to school for one week(in fact, i am very happy about this, cause i could stay at home for a few days without doing anything)

Two years ago my mom was sick (because she worked too busily and got a big pressure).Fortunately ,now she is recovering well. Well,I came back to study here because she thought that after 5 years I had already studied Chinese very well and i have to learn italian also as well as Chinese 'cause i am a half italian.I have also studied Malaysian for 2 years but now i don't remember it anymore,and can you speak Indonesian?

I saw those photos of Bali that you took,they are really wonderful!! I love traveling too..

On the other hand,you are right,that temporality i have no boyfriend,still alone.^^ Doesn't matter,maybe it is better stay by oneself(in my opinion),I have already too many things to do at school for learning,in our class we have to study 4 languages together(Latin,English,French,Italian)I am gonna crazy for this,and in our class they're all female. >< They are very studious,but i still like playing like a child. - -There are enough things to do every day,so have no time for boyfriend.>< As for you,don't worry that i believe you will find a new girlfriend soon! ^^(as fast as you can)

Are you studying in the University now? Which department?

At last,best wishes.(And I wish you a Happy Halloween in advance)

你的这段有很多问题呀。

首先，how do you do ?是在见面时侯打招呼时说的，书面语应该说hello! are you fine ? i haven't seen you these days , i am feel sorry for that the late e-mail .because i have gone to shcool study for only a week . and two years ago my mom feel sick . Fortunately ,she recovered well.Well,i came back to study here because she though that 5 years ago I already had studied Chinese very well and i have to learn Italian as well as Chinese because i am a half Italian.I also have studied Malaysian for 2 years but now i can't remember anything. I want to know if you can speak Indonesian?

you are right,that at the moment i have no boyfriend,and still alone.^^ but it doesn't matter,maybe it is better to stay by myself(in my opinion),I have many things to do at school for learning,in our class we have to study 4 languages together(Latin,English,French,Italian)I am gonna to be crazy for this,and in our class they're all female. >< They are very studious,but i still like playing like a child. - -I have too many things to do everyday,and have no time for boyfriend.>< As for you,don't worry that i believe you will find a new girlfriend soon! ^^(as fast as you can)

Are you studying in the University now? Which department?

At last,best wishes.(And I wish you a Happy Halloween in advance

Dear ***:

Hello！how do you do？

Sorry that I didn‘t answer your e-mail bcause I had a fever.For this reason i didn't go to school for a week(in fack i am very happy about this,because i stay at home for a few days without doing any homework)Two years ago my mom was sick (because she works too hard and got a big pressure)Fortunately now she is recovering well. Well,i came back to study here because she though that after 5 years I already had studied Chinese very well and i have to learn Italian as well as Chinese 'cause i am a half Italian.I also have studied Malaysian for 2 years but now i can't remember anything. I want to know if you can speak Indonesian?

I saw those photos of Paris that you took,they are really wonderful!! I love traveling too..

On the other hand,you are right,that at the moment i have no boyfriend,and still alone.^^ Doesn't matter,maybe it is better to stay by myself(in my opinion),I already have too many things to do at school for learning,in our class we have to study 4 languages together(Latin,English,French,Italian)I am gonna to be crazy for this,and in our class they're all female. >< They are very studious,but i still like playing like a child. - -I have too many things to do everyday,and have no time for boyfriend.>< As for you,don't worry that i believe you will find a new girlfriend soon! ^^(as fast as you can)

Are you studying in the University now? Which department?

At last,best wishes.(And I wish you a Happy Halloween in advance)

给你看了一遍 把错的都改了 你看看

Hello！how do you do？这两句就重复了。

我为你详细解答，保证修改之后一点儿错误也没有