帮我改一下这篇托福作文，在线等。据说句子太繁琐而且用词简单。改得好追加分~
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- 提问者网友：蔚蓝的太阳
- 2021-04-05 16:15
帮我改一下这篇托福作文，在线等。据说句子太繁琐而且用词简单。改得好追加分~
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- 五星知识达人网友：爱难随人意
- 2021-04-05 17:45
这么长！先改一段您试看，若满意，再继续。
The friends with whom (that) you can have fun are more important than the friends from whom you can get help?
We are living (live) in a gregarious society, relying on cooperation to maintain (sustain) our life. So, everyone needs friends. Some friends are funny; some friends are like-minded; some friends can help you a lot; some friends are only fair-weather friends. Some people holds the idea that the friends whom you can have fun with are more important than the friends whom you can get help from. By contrast, in my eyes, the friends who (can) help you a lot are much more significant than the friends who can make you laugh. My arguements (reasons) are following.
The friends with whom (that) you can have fun are more important than the friends from whom you can get help?
We are living (live) in a gregarious society, relying on cooperation to maintain (sustain) our life. So, everyone needs friends. Some friends are funny; some friends are like-minded; some friends can help you a lot; some friends are only fair-weather friends. Some people holds the idea that the friends whom you can have fun with are more important than the friends whom you can get help from. By contrast, in my eyes, the friends who (can) help you a lot are much more significant than the friends who can make you laugh. My arguements (reasons) are following.
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