Alan Brown ,男孩，14 岁，7年级4班学生。他喜欢玩电脑、做运动。他非常喜欢打篮球，他有5个篮球，但他没有足球。他也喜欢汉语。他父母都是老师。现在住在宁波。他还有一条黑

Alan Brown ,男孩，14 岁，7年级4班学生。他喜欢玩电脑、做运动。他非常喜欢打篮球，他有5个篮球，但他没有足球。他也喜欢汉语。他父母都是老师。现在住在宁波。他还有一条黑白相间的狗叫Eddie,他们是好朋友。
要求：1.有词准确；2.语句通顺；3.表达清楚；4. 一定要包含所有信息。
字数60个左右。Alan Brown is a boy. He is 14 years old. He is in Class Seven，Grade Four. He likes playing computer games and playing sports. His favorite sports is playing basketball，and he has five basketballs.But he doesn’t have soccers. He likes Chinese also. His parents are all teachers. Now they are living Ningbo. Besides, he has a black and white dog ,Its name is Eddie. They are good friends.

(答案→)Alan Brown is a boy. He is 14 years old. He is in Class Seven，Grade Four. He likes playing computer games and playing sports. His favorite sports is playing basketball，and he has five basketballs.But he doesn’t have soccers. He likes Chinese also. His parents are all teachers. Now they are living Ningbo. Besides, he has a black and white dog ,Its name is Eddie. They are good friends. 解析：试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为详细。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。写作中注意将材料所给内容介绍清楚，亦可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态，第三人称进行描述，注意时态和主谓一致等问题。写作中注意使用叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单.如:He is……；He likes……；play basketball打篮球；等。但是通过一些连词，如：and等的使用，使得文章避免单纯的重复，使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对布朗及其家人有了一个比较全面的了解，不失为一篇上等作文。

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