帮我改改英语作文！

Hello,I'm very happy to introduce myself.My name is Cutie. I'm a middle school student in Huiyang Junior School.I'm little short with short hair.I also wear a glasses. You can guess what I like do?
Yes,I like reading books, expesialy novels.I buy the magazines every months, but my mom do not agree with it.She think it's bad for my study.What do you think? I think novels can improve my writting.
In school, most of classmates are my friends.They said I'm very funny and friendly. But I don't think so. I think I'm a lazy girl.For exampel , I can play violin, but I don't want to practice it every day.How lazy I am!
This is me.Thank you.

有没有错误的语法或单词？越快越好谢谢~

楼主觉得改的还行就给个满意哦 谢谢

I'm little short with short hair应该是i'm a little girl with short hair

I also wear a glasses应该是i also wear a pair of glasses

You can guess what I like do应该是can you guess what i like

I buy the magazines every months应该是mouth 后面没有s

my mom do not agree with it.应该是agree with me on it

I think novels can improve my writting我觉得应该加个that在think后面，从句有that 读起来好听点

For exampel 应该是拼写错了example

I can play violin应该是play the vioolin

but I don't want to practice it every day我觉得把want换成like更好

希望采纳 有什么问题可以追问 也可以提供代写 O(∩_∩)O谢谢！

Hello,Glad to introduce myself.My name is Cutie. I'm a middle school student in Huiyang Junior School.I'm short and I have short hair.I also wear a pair of glasses. You can guess what I like doing? Yes,I like reading books, expesialy novels.I buy magazines every month, but my mom do not agree with it.She think it's bad for my study.What do you think? I think novels can improve my writting. In school, most of classmates are my friends.They said I'm very funny and friendly. But I don't think so. I think I'm a lazy girl.For example , I can play the violin, but I don't want to practice it every day.How lazy I am!This is me.

Thank you.

Hello,I'm very glad to introduce myself.My name is Cutie. I'm a middle school student from Huiyang Junior School.I'm a little short with short hair.I also wear a pair of glasses. Can you guess what I like do? Well,I like reading books, expesialy novels.I buy the magazines every month, but my mom does not agree with them.She think they are bad for my learning.What do you think of them? I think novels can improve my writting ability（写作能力）. In my school, most of classmates are my friends.They think I'm very funny and friendly. But I don't think so. I think I'm a lazy girl.For example , I can play the violin, but I don't want to practice it every day.How lazy I am! This is me.Can you tell me what your name is ？

“expesialy” novels 是什么？

I'm little short with short hair有问题，如果说有点矮就是I'm a little short , 后面还是改成I have short hair比较好点。I also wear a glasses错了，单复数出问题，要改成I also wear a pair of glasses.

You can guess what I like do?改成Can you guess what I like doing?

expesialy应该是especially.后面every months改为every month

but my mom do not agree with it.直接写but my mom do not agree就好了，如果要加应该是with me.

I think novels can improve my writting后面可以加上skills（技巧）

most of classmates 应该是most of my classmates

For exampel 应该是For example

play violin应该是play the violin

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