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英语好的帮我纠错下,谢谢了

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  • 提问者网友:孤山下
  • 2021-05-05 20:38

Emma is a nice girl. She is my good friend and we often play with each other. She is 13 years old.she was born in JiaXing . We're the same age. She likes singing. I like singing, too.
She always smiles because she likes smiling. In the morning, she smiles to everybody and everyone feels warm. She often says smiling is the bridge to the friendship. I think she is polite.
She is helpful, too. She often helps me with my lessons. We usually learn from each other . I like Emma.

拜托了哦、 万分感谢~

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  • 五星知识达人网友:何以畏孤独
  • 2021-05-05 22:11
Emma is a nice girl. She is my good friend and we often play together. She is 13 years old.born in Jiaxing . We're the same age. She likes singing. so do I.
She always smiles because she likes smiling. In the morning, she smiles to everybody so that everyone feels warmly. She often says smiling is the bridge of friendship. I think she is politely.
She is warm-hearted, too. She often helps me with my lessons. We often learn from each other yet. I like Emma. 改好了
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  • 1楼网友:詩光轨車
  • 2021-05-06 02:45
Emma is a nice girl. She is my good friend and we usually play with each other. She is 13 years old. And she was born in JiaXing . We're at the same age. She likes singing, and so do I. She always smiles because she's a happy girl. In the morning, she shows her smile to everybody and everyone feels warm. She says a smile is a bridge to the friendship. I think she is polite. And she is helpful, too. She always helps me with my lessons. We learn from each other . I really like Emma.
  • 2楼网友:低音帝王
  • 2021-05-06 01:13

Emma is a kind girl. She is my good friend and we often play together. she was born in JiaXing .She is 13 years old now and We're the same age. She likes singing,so do I.

She always keeps smiling becuase She thinks that smiling is the bridge to the friendship.Every day, she smiles to everybody to let them feel warm.In my opinion,she is polite. Besides,she's a warm-hearted person,and she often helps me with my study. Sometimes we also learn from each other . It's my great pleasure to be her friend.

拜托了哦、 万分感谢~

  • 3楼网友:纵马山川剑自提
  • 2021-05-05 23:47

Emma is a nice girl. She is my good friend and we often play with each other. She is 13 years old.she was born in JiaXing . We're the same age. She likes singing,so do I. She always smiles because she likes smiling. In the morning, she smiles to everybody and everyone feels warm. She often says smiling is the bridge to the friendship. I think she is polite. She is helpful, too. She often helps me with my lessons. We usually learn from each other . I like Emma

英语水平还是不错嘛!几乎找不到什么错误……

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