谁来帮我看看这篇英语作文对不对,错在哪里

谁来帮我看看这篇英语作文对不对,错在哪里
I have a good friend.Her name is Li Lin.She is a chinese girl.
She is thirday years old.She is tall and slim.And she has short hair.She aiso has two big eyes and a small mouth.Everyone like her very much.She is studies at No.10 Middle School.She is in Class 2,Grade 7.She is good at Maths and running,too.She is my hero.Because I am not good at Maths and running.Her hobbise are swimming and playing tennis.She likes Spring Festival.Because we can piay and it is fun.

She is studies at No.10 Middle School--is studying /studies
hero--heroine
Because I am--it is because that...
it is fun--have a fun(没有错,这样更好)
重复的我就不说了

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