蹦极 攀岩等毛线活动受到很多人的欢迎 尤其是年轻人 有人认为这些活动很危险 应该被限制或禁止 有人却认为这种活动给人们带来很多新鲜的感觉 因此应该鼓励 请选择其中一种观点阐述你的看法及理由
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Nowadays,more and more adventure activities,like bungee jumping and rock climbing,enjoy great popularity,especially among the youth.
Nowadays,more and more adventure activities,like bungee jumping and rock climbing,enjoy great popularity,especially among the youth.,on this topic,there are different opinions.Some says that the adveture activities are a little too dangerous to take because even the protection measures are very well there are also many accidents to happen.and in fact the most protection measures that the adventures taked are not so well.And the truth is taking adventure activities are even more dangerous than expected.
the others say that some people are only too worried.the adventure activities are not so dangerous as they think because the people who take adventure activities often have taken enough training before and they're most skillful at the adventure activities because they've tried this many times.And after this,they will get many emotions and courage from these activities to promote them to be brave enough to challenge the difficulties they meet in livfe.
I think both are reasonable but I to be passionate in my life is more important .I won't afraid of the danger in the adventure activies because I think courage can beat everything including the difficulties.
可能写的有点多了，不过这个话题还是很有写头的。