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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错

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  • 提问者网友:寂寞撕碎了回忆
  • 2021-01-03 17:40
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father was a first - class chef.I eventually decided to give up my previously job as a salesman and train as a chef.Three years later,I became head chef in restaurant.Soon after which,I realized my career was becoming successful and I found I had to make a choice.I could neither work for a big restaurant or open one of my own.And my father became ill and I got his job. On my first day at work I was greeting by an unexpected cold reception.What made it bad was that I was having a bad cold.With my hands shook, I entered the kitchen.I hold my breath, stood up and said “You all know my Father.Whether you loved him or hated him, I don’t care about.It’s the past. Now, Let’s get to work...”previously → previous
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  • 五星知识达人网友:举杯邀酒敬孤独
  • 2021-01-03 18:10
(答案→)previously → previous 解析:【小题1】I eventually decided to give up my previously job as a salesman and train as a chef.改为previous。题意:我最后决定放弃先前的工作。previous,形容词修饰job。【小题2】Three years later,I became head chef in ∧ restaurant. 加上a. 题意:三年后在一家饭店成为首席厨师。restaurant在这里是泛指。【小题3】Soon after which, 改为that。此后不久。that为指示代词,指代“成为首席厨师”这一事实。【小题4】I could neither work for a big restaurant or open one of my own. 改为either。题意:(因为职业上很成功)我可以到一家大饭店服务,也可以开一家自己的饭店。either … or …:要么……要么……【小题5】And my father became ill and I got his job. 改为But.。父亲的突然生病打乱了我原先的计划,我只得接替他的工作。这是一个转折。【小题6】On my first day at work I was greeting by an unexpected cold reception.改为greeted。上班第一天受到冷遇。be greeted with:遭遇。【小题7】What made it bad was that I was having a bad cold.改为worse。(不但遭到冷遇)更糟糕的是感冒了。make sth. worse:使情况更糟。【小题8】With my hands shook, 改为shaking。hands是shake的执行者,应使用现在分词。【小题9】I hold my breath. 改为held。前面的entered,后面的stood都是过去时态,要求hold也用过去式。【小题10】I don’t care about. 去掉about。care about应后接宾语。本句中没有宾语,about多余。
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  • 1楼网友:低音帝王
  • 2021-01-03 18:25
对的,就是这个意思
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