我的英语作文不好希望有老师能帮我批改一下我写的作文

我的英语作文不好希望有老师能帮我批改一下我写的作文
Fever of Bizarre Pets
Recently,an increasing number of people involved in the Fever of Bizarre Pets. Many of them keep lizards,snakes and even tigers or lions in the foreign countries.However, this popularity have an influence on our country in the nearest couple of years.
A lot of comments were given by the peple,but they don't have corresponding ideas on this issue. On the one hand,a great number of people hold that these unnormal animals fed by the commons, maybe their one of their neighbors has one ,is unacceptable.Because many sorts of them are strongly poinonous, it's not safe for people who around those pets.On the other hand, some believe that this behavior is the best approach to communicate with not only the animals but also the nature,where we should belong to.
As far as my concerned, I prefer to support the later point. With the roaring development of economy,people almost have got rid of poverty,but they lose their eye on the most beautiful,comfortable and vital world--the nature .But I acknoledge that it maybe bring about many security problems. Therefore,regulationg and rules is supposed to be work out by the authorities in order to avoid something dangerous happens.Only through the two aspects,can we dissolve the contradiction between the two sides.

作文用不着别人改,自己大脑直接用英文思维出来的就是英文了.大脑思维对/好,出来的才能对/好! 大脑用中文思维,写出来的英文就不知道是什么东西了!

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