英语高手帮忙修改下面的e-mail，谢了！

Dear Tom,

Thanks for your email. And thanks for telling me so many interesting things about your father. To return the favor, I am going to tell you something about my father too.

My father is Chinese. My grandparents were very hard-working. My father had always been a really smart person when he grew up.he and my mother with me came to Beijing. Now he became a successful businessman.
This is the story of my father. There are a great deal I could learn from him.

Nice talking to do receiving your reply.

Yours,
Li Hua

Dear Tom,

I am very happy to receive your email. And thanks for telling me so many interesting things about your father. As a return, I am going to tell you something about my father too.

My father is Chinese. My grandparents were very hard-working. My father had always been a really smart person when he grew up.he came to Beijing with my mother and me. Now he is a successful businessman.
This is the story of my father. There are a great deal I could learn from him.

Nice talking to you.I am expecting your replay.

Yours,
Li Hua

Dear Tom,

Thanks for your email and for telling me so many interesting things about your father. By returning the favor, I am going to tell you something about my father too.

My father is Chinese. My grandparents were very hard-working people. My father had always been a really smart person while he grew up. He took my mother and me to Beijing for his business. Now he is a successful businessman. This is the story of my father. There are some great deals I could learn from him.

Looking forward to receive your reply.

Truly yours,

Li Hua