请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”要求：1. 就此材
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- 提问者网友：谁的错
- 2021-02-06 20:54
请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”要求：1. 就此材料发表你的看法； 2. 紧扣材料，有明确的观点； 3. 词数不少于60； 4. 在答题卡上作答。
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- 五星知识达人网友：逃夭
- 2021-02-06 21:04
One possible version
This happens frequently in a teenager’s world which depends on cell phones too much. In the eyes of the youngsters’, friendship is important. But when it comes to the balance of friends and phones, kids tends to regard the latter as their bigger share.
I don’t think it is wise to neglect a devoted human friend but favor the phone, because human friends can push us on in the fierce struggle in life while phones are only our tools. So next time, when your friend falls, don’t laugh at him or her but help him or her stand up.
审题：friend和phone形成对比; laugh和cry形成矛盾。因此有话可说。一般而论，应该选择批驳重电话而轻友谊的信念，即不要重物质而轻友情。
写作技巧
首先要对材料进行阐释，此时不宜抄袭原材料，而是改写材料。其次是对这中选择进行选择性论述。最后提出建议。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。特别是要尽量使用较为复杂的句型，如状语从句，定语从句等。
This happens frequently in a teenager’s world which depends on cell phones too much. In the eyes of the youngsters’, friendship is important. But when it comes to the balance of friends and phones, kids tends to regard the latter as their bigger share.
I don’t think it is wise to neglect a devoted human friend but favor the phone, because human friends can push us on in the fierce struggle in life while phones are only our tools. So next time, when your friend falls, don’t laugh at him or her but help him or her stand up.
审题：friend和phone形成对比; laugh和cry形成矛盾。因此有话可说。一般而论，应该选择批驳重电话而轻友谊的信念，即不要重物质而轻友情。
写作技巧
首先要对材料进行阐释，此时不宜抄袭原材料，而是改写材料。其次是对这中选择进行选择性论述。最后提出建议。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。特别是要尽量使用较为复杂的句型，如状语从句，定语从句等。
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- 1楼网友：蕴藏春秋
- 2021-02-06 22:19
one possible version this happens frequently in a teenager’s world which depends on cell phones too much. in the eyes of the youngsters’, friendship is important. but when it comes to the balance of friends and phones, kids tends to regard the latter as their bigger share. i don’t think it is wise to neglect a devoted human friend but favor the phone, because human friends can push us on in the fierce struggle in life while phones are only our tools. so next time, when your friend falls, don’t laugh at him or her but help him or her stand up.
一个可能的版本
这经常发生在十几岁的世界取决于手机的太多了。在年轻人的眼里,友谊是很重要的。但当谈到朋友和平衡的电话,孩子们往往认为后者更大的份额。
我不认为这是明智的忽视投入人类的朋友,但支持电话,因为人类的朋友可以推动我们在激烈的斗争生活,手机只是我们的工具。所以下一次,当你的朋友,不要嘲笑
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