英语改错 请求答案 谢谢

My school life is very interesting but meaningful.I usually get up at a quarter past six.After I wash his face,I read English for about half an hour.I think what it is a good habit.I always go to school by bike,to eat lunch at school and have a short sleep on the classroom.In the afternoon school is over at 5 o'clock.After school,we often play basketball or do some other sport on the playground happy.I went home at about five forty.Have had supper,I watch TV for while,and then I do my homework.I go to bed about9:30.

but改为and
wash his face改为wash my face
what改为that或者去掉what
to eat 中的to去掉
on the classroom改为in the classroom
sport改为sports
happy改为happily
went 改为go
Have had改为Having had
I go to bed about9:30,改为at about...

during my summer holiday in 2012，i found a part-time job as a waiter in a small restaurant. i had no idea that it was such a hard job before i applied it. i had to work seven hours a day，which continuously lasted for three weeks. the job was very boring because every day i had to get up early and went to bed late. every day i had to repeat the same kind of work，and that nearly drove me mad. i almost gave up, but finally i stuck it out until the new semester began.

My school life is very interesting and meaningful.I usually get up at quarter past six.Then I wash my face,I read English for about half an hour.I think that it is a good habit.I always go to school by bike, have lunch at school and have a short sleep in the classroom.In the afternoon class is over at 5 o'clock.After school,we often play basketball or do some other sports on the playground happyly.I go home at about five forty.Having had supper,I watch TV for a while,and then I do my homework.I go to bed about9:30. 请对照看，希望有帮助到你~

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