英语大神帮我看一下我写的这句英文有没有问题

英语大神帮我看一下我写的这句英文有没有问题
My primary responsibility was the recruitment of suitable candidates for positions within the company,
conducting an ongoing review process throughout employees’ time with the company and staying
well-versed in all aspects of employment law.

我帮你改写一下吧
My primary responsiblity is the recruitment of suitable candidated for positions within the company.Also conducting an ongoing review process throught emplyees' time with the company and staying well-versed in all aspects of employment law.
吧句子分开是应为防止run-on sentence,不然会有点太长了

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