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       Today many wild animals were faced with the danger of extinction,because the environment there they are living has greatly changed. For an example, with the development of cities, the using of poisons to kill insect and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrower and narrower. Food for many animals now is run out. Meanwhile, man is killing off species just to get its fur, skin, horns, teeth and meat.

       In order to protect our resources or the environment, people should realize the loss of any species means greatly loss to human beings. Therefore, we should make measures to prevent pollution and people should be forbidden kill animals and wlid life reserves should be set up.

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Today many wild animals were faced with the danger of extinction,because the environment where they are living has greatly changed. For an（删去） example, with the development of cities, the using of poisons to kill insects and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrower and narrower. Food for many animals now is run out of. Meanwhile, man is killing off species just to get their fur, skin, horns, teeth and meat.

    In order to protect our resources or the environment, people should realize the loss of any species means great loss to human beings. Therefore, we should make measures to prevent pollution and people should be forbidden killing animals and wlid life reserves should be set up.

1.For an example把an去掉。

2.在run out后面接of或把is去掉，run改成ran.

3.be forbidden to kill animals.

如今很多野生动物都面对生存在问题，因为他们生活的环境已经变了很多了。例如，随着城市的发展，用来杀昆虫的药，和严重的污染，他们生存的地方变得越来越狭窄了。他们需要的食物也吃完了。总之，人类在杀动物只是为了他们的皮毛，羊角和肉。

为了保护我们的资源和环境，人们应该发觉任何物种的消失都意味着对人类很大的损失。因此，我们应该采取措施来防止污染，人类应该禁止捕杀动物，让野生动物重见生机。