师带徒部门负责人评语,一篇小作文，求纠错意见
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师带徒部门负责人评语,一篇小作文，求纠错意见
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- 2021-05-11 18:03
写得非常真挚，阅读蛮愉快的。
能喜爱柳林风声的人，必定是怀抱爱心之人。
这就足够了，瑕不掩瑜。
多年阅读和求知感受告诉我，真诚的情感、朴实的情怀，远胜一切动人的文字。
哦，抱歉，对于英文的读后感，为对你有更多提高的帮助，我们还是换个英文思维来交流吧。
how to say? while i'm reading yr feelings about this gentle & sweet story.
pure,simple and happy.
these are the feelings you struck me at the end of your tale.
that's enough,honey!well done!
if you then still insist that all readings must have a close speech,ok!i'll have one for you.
read as your heart pursuits,write what your heart feels,if they are real and hot,and they will give us warm and strength,then----that's great!
all the skills and grammars,i just want to say,that's just like a doornob,it's only use is for open a door.not the door itself.it's just a tool,honey.dont's stick on it, just use it.there's a wiseful chinese sayings 工欲善其事必先利其器，that's it and only it!
right now,what you lack-of is just time,time and tide wait for no man,ok,that's just the side of a coin,we could make it better,couldn't we? for you? it'll be time and tide makes us better.just stick to your goals,and someday,you'll get what you want.
have a nice day,dear!
yours sincerely,
net-freind
能喜爱柳林风声的人，必定是怀抱爱心之人。
这就足够了，瑕不掩瑜。
多年阅读和求知感受告诉我，真诚的情感、朴实的情怀，远胜一切动人的文字。
哦，抱歉，对于英文的读后感，为对你有更多提高的帮助，我们还是换个英文思维来交流吧。
how to say? while i'm reading yr feelings about this gentle & sweet story.
pure,simple and happy.
these are the feelings you struck me at the end of your tale.
that's enough,honey!well done!
if you then still insist that all readings must have a close speech,ok!i'll have one for you.
read as your heart pursuits,write what your heart feels,if they are real and hot,and they will give us warm and strength,then----that's great!
all the skills and grammars,i just want to say,that's just like a doornob,it's only use is for open a door.not the door itself.it's just a tool,honey.dont's stick on it, just use it.there's a wiseful chinese sayings 工欲善其事必先利其器，that's it and only it!
right now,what you lack-of is just time,time and tide wait for no man,ok,that's just the side of a coin,we could make it better,couldn't we? for you? it'll be time and tide makes us better.just stick to your goals,and someday,you'll get what you want.
have a nice day,dear!
yours sincerely,
net-freind
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