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[摘要]创意是广告的灵魂，是将广告赋予精神和生命的活动。
[Abstract] Originality is the soul of an advertisement and also an activity to endow an ad with vitality.

好的广告创意可以吸引更多消费者的注意，对企业在市场中的竞争有着积极的意义。
By attracting more consumers' attention , a good original ad plays a positive role for the enterprise in market competition.

由于我国的广告业尚未成熟，在广告创意这方面存在着许多问题。
As an immature industry in China, however, advertising still has many problems with regard to originality.

本文首先从广告创意的概念、特征、基本原则和创意组成的要素等基本理论问题入手，探讨并分析了当今广告创意存在的问题与误区。
This article begins with some basic theoretical issues of advertising originality such as its concept, characteristics, principles and elements. Following that are an investigation and analysis about the existing problems and mistaken ideas of current advertising originality.

最后通过想象力、销售目的、广告诉求等方面来寻求广告创意的突破点，并提出了自己的观点和建议。
Finally included in this article is an attempt to seek a breakthrough in advertising originality through imagination,sales target,and advertising appeals, and also some personal views and suggestions.

[关键词]广告创意； 误区； 突破口
[Key Words] advertising originality; mistaken ideas; breakthroughs

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