帮我看一下我这五句翻译对不对

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提问者网友：欲望失宠
2021-07-28 00:35

我最喜欢的歌曲是由卡彭特演唱的《昨日重现》。（Yesterday Once More;Carpenters）

My favourate song is the《Yesterday Once More》of Carpenters

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当我听到这首歌时，我感到快乐放松。（feel happy and relaxed）

When I heard this song.I was feeling happy and relaxed.

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我喜欢这首歌是因为它能使我回想起我的快乐童年。(remind sb of sth.)
I like this song,because it remind me of my happy childhood.

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这首歌听起来多美啊！（How...）
How beautiful the song sounds!

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在过去的二十多年里，美国乡村音乐已经变得越来越受欢迎。(more and more)

In the past twenty years,the Americal country music already become more and more popular.

最佳答案

五星知识达人网友：患得患失的劫
2021-07-28 01:47

以下是我认为一些必要的修改。当然你也可以参考其他朋友的提议：

My favourite song is （删掉 the）《Yesterday Once More》of The Carpenters

When I hear this song, I feel happy and relaxed.

I like this song（一般没有逗号）because it reminds me of my happy childhood.

How beautiful the song sounds!（正确）

In the past twenty years, the American country music has already become more and more popular.

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1楼网友：雪起风沙痕
2021-07-28 06:10

好像不大对

2楼网友：上分大魔王
2021-07-28 05:18

我觉得这样更好点

1.My favourate song is Carpenters' 'Yesterday Once More' (英文中没有书名号)

My favourate song is ‘Yesterday Once More’ performed by Carpenters. (更书面一点)

2. i feel happy and relaxed when i listen to this song.

3. i like this song,because it reminds (第三人称单数) me of my happy childhood.

4.How nice the song is!

5. In the past twenty years,American country music became more and more popular.

3楼网友：傲气稳了全场
2021-07-28 05:07

第一句改成by the Carpenters

第四局改成wonderful吧。how wonderful this song is.

4楼网友：雪起风沙痕
2021-07-28 03:59

My favorite song is sang by the Carpenter's "Yesterday Once More." （Yesterday Once More;Carpenters)

5楼网友：洎扰庸人
2021-07-28 03:37

最后一句用现在完成时，（注意时态）！

6楼网友：三千妖杀
2021-07-28 03:10

我最喜欢的歌曲是由卡彭特演唱的《昨日重现》。（Yesterday Once More;Carpenters）

My favourate song is the《Yesterday Once More》of Carpenters

My favourite song is Yesterday Once More by Carpenters. (谁唱的歌曲用by)

当我听到这首歌时，我感到快乐放松。（feel happy and relaxed）

When I heard this song.I was feeling happy and relaxed.

When I listen to it, I am happy and relaxed. (给我感觉你是在说一个经常的现象，所以没有用过去时)

我喜欢这首歌是因为它能使我回想起我的快乐童年。(remind sb of sth.) I like this song,because it remind me of my happy childhood.

I like the song because it reminds me of my happy childhood. (主谓保持一致）

这首歌听起来多美啊！（How...） How beautiful the song sounds!

How beautiful the song is! （感觉用is 好些）

在过去的二十多年里，美国乡村音乐已经变得越来越受欢迎。(more and more)

In the past twenty years,the Americal country music already become more and more popular.

During the past over twenty years, American country music has become more and more popular. (一定要用现在完成时）

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